Really, for 20 minutes? That was what I might produce after an hour of re-write...if I was lucky. It's very good. I love the imagery of Maggie's moronic eyes gaping at Andy...

Ah, that was lovely! Very well characterised. That was really, really sweet, I enjoyed it a lot. Please write some more! You should definitely turn this into a series.

Tricki!

You are sutch a good writer! And you have made these two so charming and good! super flirts both of them.. :)

Merry Christmas

karin