-cries-

...poor fuujin... why'd it have to end this way?

-cries harder-

Ooooo, that was neato! I've never read anything like it. GOOD WORK!

Beautiful...

*Sniff* That was sooo sad! Keep up the good work...

WAAAAH! *sniffles* Poor Fujin! I'm gonna cry! It was so sad! Thought it was very well done.

Excellent for a first. Gonna read part II now..

Angst. Goddamn, it's ridden with surges of wretched torment. Excellent. Keep writing.

Angst. Goddamn, it's ridden with surges of wretched torment. Excellent. Keep writing.

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*sob* this is a very good one. MAKE MORE!

I have to say I like this one better than three words. . . it's just as depressing, but the ending is a bit more peaceful. Keep up the good work!

AGHHH! Poor, poor Fuj! ;_; Saifuu, Saifuu! Kaze-san, you're not gonna end the story this way, are you? Wonderful, wonderful story. I need more!

oh...even better. You really have a thing for writing... I feel so sorry for Fujin... If you were to match everyone up...Seifer probably would be with...Quistis. And that DOES leave Fujin with no one...sad...very sad. Again...great writing...keep it up. Once more...

That was so beautiful. his whole series is. Write more! You have so much talent!

Fujin went bye-bye... *wails* I won't beg you to write a sequel having Seifer and Fujin kiss and make up and ruin the melancholy beauty of this piece, but can we have a sequel just to find out what happened? I demand closure! I love this story ^_^