Oh... You know when you get that achey feeling inside. Well I got that. But so sad... all saifuu fics have been sad lately *pouts*. But, very good.

This is very good. I don't get why it's not two fics though...you did a wonderful job for a first fic.

That was great! So sweet.

I like this, but shouldn't it be two seperate fanfics? Or is it incomplete?

Great imagery, well written.

Wow! Very, very nice! Well written, and in my opinion, you captured the attitudes of the characters flawlessly. If this is your first, I can't wait to see what's coming up!

Very nice! Very nice indeed. And you say it's your first fanfic? Wow.

My this was written VERY well. Keep it up! Please continue with this!

VERY GOOD!