please update soon.

sorry for the late review, but I was on a class trip in "Hambachtal" sooo no Internet. only dutch websites...

Wow. Quite descriptive, and overall it was average, I guess. I like happy endings though :) Yay! :D

cool :) mmm really good and thet Moon Legacy one liner at the end! Zhalia had too take in some of Dante's talents/habbits while they were making love cause it's usually he who is using them(sometimes anicent seekerts are more valuble than any titans or I don't think so)...gosh I can't help but wonder what will be when they have kids that should be interesting mix Zhalia and Dante mix together and what will come out...truly I see little Grissom from CSI coming trough...loved this chapter and now please update soon this and Miss You. Please!

Like this story veryveryvery much! no I love it!

please write soon another long chapter! althought your hands hurt... maybe more trainen? i don't have a problem with hurting hands... XD

JUST UPDATE SOOON!

hope you will update really soon!

i'm curious about it.

uuuuu it's getting better and better now :)and school sucks :):):):):):):):):):). Mmmm there is something with the chess here is there not oh and I made this video lately...tell me what you think... watch?vyVFuufCXdNw

I think it kind of fits the two of them(and I love this song)...story was great and please update the Miss you...please I want to see what's next

Like it (like always), especially the last part.

hope you'll update soon! (like always...)

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A nicer term for what they did would be 'make love'. ;DDD Heehee. Other then that, the tension really builds up and I can't wait for the next chapter!

hehe, Dante and Zhalia had slept together...I wonder what would Zane say about that :) and things are getting complicated I wonder what's next so update soon :)

uhhhh...they had sex? ...

*cough* sorry...:D

please update soon!

like it! hhope you'll update soon again!

well, at least Dante and Zhalia didn't get caught with their... well interesting night XD

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Poor Zane...

faith and darren on the ground and the comment from amber...it reminiscent me of my best friend and me...our comments are such the same in such situations :D:D:D:D

please update soon!

Like it! hope you'll update soon and this time sooner than last time! (it's a really good story!)

Oh my goodness! I hope nothing will happen to Zane and that nothing bad will happen to Zhalia...or at least not too bad...he..hehe-nervous laughter- and that moment with Darren and Faith was very good...and Amber's comentary :) it's nice of you to update :), I'm glad you're back. Hope you will update another story soon...

Shit! o.O i'm more than sorry i noticed the chapter only now...fuck i'm so daffy -.-"

okey i like this chapter like the other one's

i'll hope you'll update soon! and I'm sorry again...

now i'll go and beat myself...:[