I knew right away that it was going to be Sheila. Poor Cye. What's going to happen when she and Ariel meet I wonder.

That was such a great ending! It was so sweet! Good job writing such a good story. Kudos! Cye and Robyn will be happy for a long time, I'm sure. Thanks for posting this!

FINALLY. They're together. YAY. Good chapter! It was nice to see the two finally kiss. You even incorperated the whale into the story. Very nice!

Good chapter! Cye is finally starting to realize that he's in love. It's sad what happened to Skye and Starr. I hope they take everything alright. Their future may be hectic, that's for sure. Everyone is really lucky that Mia has a mansion, or they'd probably all be cramped in one bedroom. Sigh...you guys or hopeless. Anyway, keep it up!

TALPA HAS A FREAKING SON? Great chapter. The fight scene was amazing! I could actually see exactly what was happening. So Kioko has the power of plant...got it...I think. Anyway, keep it up!

So Cye had some power that no one understands, and Kojiro took his place in the line up for the inferno armor. Got it. By the way, is Ryo wearing it right now? After all, Kojiro couldn't have performed his attack if the armor was in the open. Other than that, awsome chapter. Seeing Cye and Robyn's relationship grow is cool too!

So sweet. Nice battle scene. It's about time someone from "Ronin Warriors" attacked while the enemy is monologing or vise versa. I think in the show, Rowen did it, but only once...yeah. Anyway, SHEILA HAS FALLEN! HURRAY! Good chapter. Keep it up!

How sweet. Their relationship finally starts to develop...in a pantry. Poor Cye has no idea about it. Sheila is evil. By the way, genius how they got away from Talpa. All that armor and weaponry has to weigh SOMETHING. Anyway, great chapter. They keep getting batter. I hope Rowen's okay. It'd be nice if Ryo wasn't the only warrior to not experience the tortures of the dynasty. Yes, poor Rowen. By the way, how the heck did Cye get there? Where was everyone else, taking a nap like he is now? STUPID LAZY FOOLS! DON'T GO TO SLEEP IN THE DYNASTY! That's death waiting to happen. Keep up the good work!

YES! Fanfiction or not, for once, Yuli is USEFUL! Ahem...anyway, this story is getting better all the time. I can't wait to see how they plan to rescue Robyn and Rowen. That'll be interesting. Badamon nearly laughed at Talpa, didn't he? Good thing he didn't, or he'd be LONG gone...Maybe he should have. Then we wouldn't to deal with him.

Cleo peeked on Rowen in the shower...How...nice. Good chapter. It's interesting to see how different people percieve the gates of time in different ways. I hope Yuli will be okay...I never like him in the show, but it seems he's grown up quite a bit. He'll be fourteen when he's released in ten years, (eight if you subtract the two already passed) and so will Ariel. How perfect. Anyway, good chapter! Keep up the good work on whatever you're working on...

Great, so now two of our best fighters are stuck in prison at Talpa's mercy. Not only that, but Sheila's planning to capture Cye again! Lady, haven't you done ENOUGH damage to him? Physically and Mentally? (NO! she yells back emotionlessly). Anyway, the dynasty has the staff, and Yuli is in serious danger along with the rest of the world. What else could go wrong?...Nevermind, I don't want to know. Quite a good fic, by the way!

Geez Anubis, could you possibly be ANY BLUNTER and ANY MORE EMOTIONLESS? Robyn isn't Sheila, that's true, but right now is NOT a good time to be talking to Cye about love. I still love Kojiro. He's probably my favorite OC in this storyline. In fact, he's probably my favorite in any storylines as far as I've read. Ariel took that well. Cye's right too. The Ronin's biological clocks ARE catching up with them. I only hope that everything'll turn out alright...Keep up the good work.

So now the team's all together, huh? Yuli got punished for messing with time to save Kojiro, right? How long is he on punishment for? Anyway, good chapter. It kind of freaked me out when Robyn just blocked Cye's memories like that. Seriously. That would scare me. She could make you forget things so easily, like arguments and such. That would unnerve me to say the least, especially when MY mind's the one on the line. Great job! Keep it up.

Robyn's definately brave, isn't she? Geez...I think I might have needed a few moments to sort out what Yuli said before I dove right into battle. Anyway, now we have Cye back! Though, it seems that he's not going to recover any time soon, who can blame him? Sheila needs to crawl into a hole and DIE, like SOON. Yes, very soon...Good chapter!

I forgot to mention this in chapter one, but Anubis is Cye's FATHER? That's confusing...I'm sure it would make much more sense if I read the original of the prequal, but now I'm really obsorbed in this story. Please forgive me for asking stupid questions. Is Kojiro Icefire? (I'm assuming that's an armor base on the conversation between Sheila and Kioko). Poor Cye...Good chapter! I still love Kojiro!