 bmthespian 10/18/11 . chapter 1sweet Christmas oneshot |
 PurplePrincess77 8/22/11 . chapter 1Awww. How sweet. My little dragonfly, my little Grandmaster. How fitting. This was funny, too. Keep it up :) |
 BlueRyuu 7/5/11 . chapter 1pssst ;) this is Nali!
how cute 3 a little one-shot. and really really shorter than your usual chapters! My goodness 3 You left some things out, but then, I don't mind at all :p I didn't realize that dragonflies were so symbolic. I just thought they looked pretty, when my dog wasn't chomping on em. I thought they were fast!
The time-line kinda confuses me a bit. If I recall correctly... Marcus announced them married back in Italy, then they came back, then some stuff happened, then they landed in the hospital yadda yadda. So at least a little bit of time passed. Then a year to the day Marcus announced it, they really were married, so that also falls in line. But I coulda swore not much time passed at all between them getting married and him finding out the Beast was Ares in disguise. Nor do I really remember a second christmas passing. Man my head is all screwed up lol :) Apparently I can't keep timelines straight! So when did Ares reveal himself... oh my head. I need some of that painkiller sludge!
Rather Author alert and favorite! |
 Fiction Ghost Writer 4/26/11 . chapter 1sweet Christmas story. I had wondered what were in those gifts that Sue wanted Leah to give out. Glad we got a glimps into that part of the story. |
 Siriusmunchkin 1/25/11 . chapter 1That was really sweet. Edward is just a font of information. Then again he's had a very long time to learn whatever he wanted to learn. Giving Sue and Harry back to their children and Bella was a much needed gift. Sue was smart to keep reminding Edward he needed to get those gifts. Hope Seth and Leah were as happy with their gifts. |
 star574 1/21/11 . chapter 1Dragonflies are such amazing creatures. The big ones are fascinating to watch. Part of my family is in VT, and at dawn and dusk the clearing around the house is filled with *big* dragonflies, hunting. It's not unusual for there to be 20 of them zooming around. |
 scarlet5 1/19/11 . chapter 1Nice oneshot! |
 mamato 1/18/11 . chapter 1Awesome one-shot! It brings back all sorts of memories from that period in the story!
Also, thanks for the reply...I think I know what you are getting at...if Bella has the power to amplify Edward's gifts or to calm him and give him peace, maybe she could give him the strength/peace to make love? He just has to make her aware of the situation, right? It seems like there was more that he was hiding from her, from the beginning, but maybe I'm wrong. The story is so long, it's easy to forget the details...I would still love a one-shot of EPOV of the bachelor party! |
 RosalieSmiled 1/18/11 . chapter 1This is just absolutely sweet. I love the dragonfly and the meanings behind it. I think it is very endearing that Edward does not see all the wonderful things he does. Sorry for the delay in my review, took forever to get enough time to read. |
 markieelizabeth 1/18/11 . chapter 1:D |
 farside79 1/5/11 . chapter 1I love your story, it is so very original and thoughtful. Such a sweet redition of "our" loving couple. Please keep writing, you also a have gift! |
 Viridis73 1/5/11 . chapter 1Lovely. Truly. And I already have you favorited and on author alert! V |
 favludo 1/4/11 . chapter 1Beautiful! I love how Sue explained to Edward she would appear without the arrow etc when he forgave himself. And I love the way Edward spoke of the dragonfly to Bella, so kind and thoughtful and just what she needed to hear so she could forgive herself too. Thanks for posting :) |
 Solenoidbelle 1/3/11 . chapter 1a beautiful story that for me made me think a lot about that gifts are sometimes more important or the giver than the receiver. I like to think about them like this - snuggled up and taking care of each other in their own way
""And you made me your wife. I call that a two for one win. I love you. Now turn out the light.""
I loved this .. *sigh* |
 AliciaZA 1/3/11 . chapter 1Happy New Year Books! Hope you have an awesome 2011 and this is NOT the year CC ends (lol).
This was a great chapter. I love these one shots that you've been posting. Adds even more interesting tidbits to the story. I wanted to know - where in the story does this chapter start at? I know it ends round about chapter 66, just after Edward and Bella get married.
I'm suprised by how many memories Edward has recovered of his human life. I love Edward's (or should I say your - lol) wordiness. Makes me feel so much smarter after having read a chapter of CC. I always learn new words, new facts and even a bit of history:).
Edward was so sweet to get Bella embroidery lessons! Edward is turning out to be an awesome husband - thoughtful, kind and really funny (hehe).
This may be a bit silly but I have a question about chapter 64 and 65 please. I don't understand what exactly happened. Chapter 64 ends with Edward and Bella together in bed. But then chapter 65 starts with Edward in the middle of a battle. I was a bit confused. Please can you explain what happened.
Can't wait for more CC! Love this story so much. Desperately hoping that it will carry on till 2012. Cos what will I read if the story ends? Lol. Happy writing... |