Good

I know this is couple years late, but you really should try to build something on this. My only problem is that Moro died at the end of the movie, so how can she have also died 15 years later?

great story! that was very well done! :)

Yes, please write more. Your fic is very nice.

Good A little strange but good all the same

Please do write some more! Great story.

i loved it please do more

It's really good. I think you should tell a little more about why Ashitaka let in the first place.

Wow! That was really good. I mean ... Wow! I like the way it was written. Very descriptive. But so antagoniziling long. I'm sitting here thinking, "...just go to the forest already Ashitaka. Just go!" The end keeps you guessing. Unless you then read the title again and really think about. Too bad you made them die, would have made are really good story. Not that it's not awesome now. I started a Mononoke fic, but it's not that good. I'm gonna re-write it. Keep up with the fics! :)