|Reviews for The Greatest Story Never Told|
| Granten 8/16/12 . chapter 1
Amusing fanfic but I can't really see the Demi-fiend worrying about anyone. At the end of the demon route he's punched out the Metatron, Lucifer, most high ranking demons and is about to go to war with YHWH. Hild's really supposed to oneshot him? The characterization of him as near-insane and possessive is interesting.
| Sandanio 11/16/11 . chapter 1
Second time reading this (as it is with most of your work) and this still creeps me out, and is utterly disgusting and yet... it just can't not be funny. I especially love those moronic little outbursts. Like "IT SMELLS LIKE TUNA!" and "IMMA FIRIN' MAH LASERS!" (Angel Biter). And this one has "No rape for you!" I can't help but find it amusing (and good for Mara) for calling Hild a bitch... And getting away with it.
| Goalihta-Leigh 1/5/11 . chapter 1
OMG O.o I so loved that story. You wrote it well and I had to laugh at the point where The Demon's lord Avatar was revealed.
That was...just to good to put it in words. Thanks for this great piece.
| Phalanxx 12/27/10 . chapter 1
Another very good story you've made. I love Mara, and as such after the way she was almost forgotten in the manga, you've been the only way I've managed to get some fix.
Something I've been meaning to ask, this story together with "Origins" and "Angel Bitter" seem to be part of the same "cosmology" you have in Oh!MyGoddess!. What I wanted to know is if any of your other OhMyGoddess stories fit into this "cosmology" as it is?
Anyway keep the good work and I hope you update some of your stories soon.