Very nice. Great imagery. I love the paragraph "Susan ignores the empty bed..." and the part "She ignores the way his eyes still look at her...she knows they always will." I think that's my favorite part. Also, the last line is very good.

I'm always glad to see one of yer works up. They're always worth reading. Can't wait to see what you add to "To Fight For Her". Remember, don't be afraid to post anything and don't be try writing other kinds of stories. Experimentation sharpens the mind the same way a wetstone sharpens a blade. Happy New Year and stay safe out there.

finally a peter and susan story. wish this wasn't a oneshot. love it and please put a new story up soon

i loved good job update asp

It's good.

Few grammar/mechanics mistakes that you might want to go back and fix.