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VLC2010 5/1/11 . chapter 1
Would b interesti sequel of how Danny n Chin works 2gether 2 get Kono n Steve bak 2 the team.

This story breaks my heart, but good wisdom from Chin. I feel so sorry for the pair of them losing the best people on the crew. I like the way how u use metaphor. Clever.
francis2 1/6/11 . chapter 1
Quite the moral quandary. I wonder when they will deal with this again in another episode. The stolen money is just another explosive around Chin's neck,don't you think?
peanut2lb 12/28/10 . chapter 1
I really like how you protratyed Chin and Danny through out this. Chin is such a great voice of wisdom. Poor Danny I can only imagine what Rachel would say about everything ending up in the papers.

Nicely done!
EnsignRo 12/27/10 . chapter 1
My heart sunk when I saw the money burning, knowing that this is going to come and bite McGarrett in the ass sometime later. You can just see the writers having a field day with it! I loved that Steve was protective of Danny, too

Your little story though was interesting to see Danny conflicted, challenging the concept of honesty -what is right and wrong and the lesson that its not always black and white.
Synbou 12/27/10 . chapter 1
An excellent piece. Thank you for sharing!
moonjat54 12/27/10 . chapter 1
I liked this a lot. That episode gave us all a great deal to think about. You put a very interesting and logical spin to it.
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