 VLC2010 5/1/11 . chapter 1Would b interesti sequel of how Danny n Chin works 2gether 2 get Kono n Steve bak 2 the team.
This story breaks my heart, but good wisdom from Chin. I feel so sorry for the pair of them losing the best people on the crew. I like the way how u use metaphor. Clever. |
 francis2 1/6/11 . chapter 1Quite the moral quandary. I wonder when they will deal with this again in another episode. The stolen money is just another explosive around Chin's neck,don't you think? |
 peanut2lb 12/28/10 . chapter 1I really like how you protratyed Chin and Danny through out this. Chin is such a great voice of wisdom. Poor Danny I can only imagine what Rachel would say about everything ending up in the papers.
Nicely done! |
 EnsignRo 12/27/10 . chapter 1My heart sunk when I saw the money burning, knowing that this is going to come and bite McGarrett in the ass sometime later. You can just see the writers having a field day with it! I loved that Steve was protective of Danny, too
Your little story though was interesting to see Danny conflicted, challenging the concept of honesty -what is right and wrong and the lesson that its not always black and white. |
 Synbou 12/27/10 . chapter 1An excellent piece. Thank you for sharing! |
 moonjat54 12/27/10 . chapter 1I liked this a lot. That episode gave us all a great deal to think about. You put a very interesting and logical spin to it. |