nice one-shot. good pacing and humor. Liked the detail in the setting and one-side POV of sasuke. very effective build up to the last line. cheers

Dear lord, every bit of this was hilarious. Totally something Kakashi would do. Kidnap in the middle of the night, fight Sasuke, and risk major bodily harm *just* to make one joke. Oh, Kakshi will you never learn? Actually, on second thought, dont learn. Hes funnier that way. Your ability to make me laugh like a fool is second to none. Just one more thing...did Naruto get her drunk?

Let me start by saying this story was incredibly entertaining :) I could easily envision the setting, plot, etc., so not only was it fun to read, it was pleasurable, too. Grammar/spelling/mechanics seemed perfect as far as I could tell, and your style of writing kept it lighthearted and very one-shot-esque. Nice job, and thanks for making me giggle :)

With All Due Respect,

Kitty XIII

P.S. - That ending was amazing ;)

OOOOOHHHH! Kakashi pwned Sasuke! ok i loved that story with all my heart...hilarious! I also have a question...Why was Hinata acting that way?