I loved this chapter. I love Hime and Touka. So glad to see someone writing them.

Minor things - the line "setting to imputing the time." I think it should be either setting or imputing. Also ""I totally set if for thirty minutes, like we said!" The if should be it.

Keep up the great work!

I love this so, so, so much. I love the title and the play with the music words. It ties into the manga so well. And the characterization and the tying Kyousuke's and Juri's stories together - it's so like the manga, where they parallel everyone's stories. I love it.