I'm crying. My tears might tear up my keyboard, but I don't care.

wow, I can't believe Amelia did that. XD I love it though. I wonder where Amelia found the magic to turn herself into a chimera?

Not bad. Not as complex as I usually like, but entertaining.

Very interesting solution... I like! Though I bet Phil and the court of Seyruun weren't too pleased... But I doubt Amelia cared. *faves*

Amelia would make such a kawaii chimera. I liked the idea. Zel needs to buck up, he's still really hot...

Great fic.

hey, this story is very good. however, it seems to be more like a prologue. it would be nice if a prequel and what-happens- after is put in.

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! AND THiS iS COMING FROM A Xellos/fillia fan... good job

make a sequle! I normaly (heh, *nromaly* a pun if you know me) don' read anything other then F/X fics but for some strange readonI read this one and am happy I did so. you should make asequle about how they rule the kinome together. cuz you kinda left me hanging here...

bye bye,

Mistress DragonFlame

"Sticks and stones may brake my bones but words will leave gashes that will feaster for all eternity..."

dayly addtion to saying:

"and there is no wound the eye can see."

Very nice story that shows if you at first you don't succeed than try again. :)

*claps hands* KAWAII! I'm so glad you are a traditionalist! I probably mentioned that in the YGO/Slayers ficcy. Saa... Good idea! first time (as i've read... SO many Slayers ficcys, like... 7 lol) ive seen that solution. Ah well. Great story!

Ja

SillyNiecy, The Great Annoying One

-May the Shovels of Insanity go with you...

Hmmm. Good story line, however it's a little too short. I don't mean to sound like you're a bad writer,

Cause I think You have a lot of potential. You just need to put more description in your story. Not

only will that make your story longer, but it will make it a lot more , well, better.

Till then, Ciao!

!-Bye

kawaii...

SO short... yet such an impacted. You did a great job at this... so orginal too. I never thought I'd see a AMelia fic as a chimera X.X

T_T, *sobs* it's so beautiful.. WAHHHHHHHHHH!

Ria: Great, now you went and got her all emotional, and I just know she's gonna take it out on us...

Me: WAHHHHHHHHHHH! (It was a verie good storie!)