 dbd823 3/29/11 . chapter 7Yay! Really long chapter. It was pretty good, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon! |
 LunarEclipse 3/28/11 . chapter 7 The wait was worth it. this was really good |
 TLK-Luvr 3/28/11 . chapter 7 Hahahaha the ending was so funny |
 Reepicheep's Girl 3/28/11 . chapter 7 Yay, you updated! Awesome story, update again soon |
 ForNarnia 3/28/11 . chapter 7 This was a really good chapter. update soon |
 MysticMelody101 3/28/11 . chapter 7Another great chapter. i'm having trouble with that error message as well and its really getting on my nerves. This was a great chapter. I loved seeing Susan and Caspian arguing with each other. Poor Mel, but this was good |
 ForNarnia 2/28/11 . chapter 6 I can't believe you thought about discontinuing this! It's too good, but i'm glad you didn't. A telmarine? that was a GREAT plot twist. can't wait to see what your ideas are |
 ForNarnia 2/28/11 . chapter 5 Wow, how'd i miss this update? That was good. can't wait to see what happens next |
 Reepicheep's Girl 2/28/11 . chapter 6 Is the pendant the Lyonis pearl? i love this story. I'm glad you decided not to discontinue it. I can't wait to see what your other idea is! |
 Reepicheep's Girl 2/28/11 . chapter 5 Yay, she's been rescued. Great job with this. I want to know what the Lyonis pearl is! |
 TLK-Luvr 2/28/11 . chapter 6 Wow, that was so intense. Update again soon. i loved the ending |
 TLK-Luvr 2/28/11 . chapter 5 Awesome. I love Mel. I'm glad she was rescued |
 LunarEclipse 2/28/11 . chapter 6 I'm glad you decided not to discontinue this. I'm still loving the story so much. Update soon |
 LunarEclipse 2/28/11 . chapter 5 Great chapter. I'm off to read the next one! |
 MysticMelody101 2/28/11 . chapter 6 Yay, i'm glad you decided not to give up on this. That was a great twist. i can't believe a Telmarine killed her parents. Great job with this and update again soon. I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve for next time. I loved the last line so much. Update |