Hey,

You havent updated for long! Update!

You cant leave those poor elves there forever!

^_-

InuNightWalker

Hi,

Well, a few mistakes. Exciting and great length.

^_^

InuNightWalker

Hiya,

. . .Loved it. . .Uh. . .>_>;; Do I have to say something else too?

^_-

InuNightWalker

This is GREAT! I'm lovin it! Please please please please please please please please update again soon!
**~ Dy *~*

i'm glad your updating the Lady of Leicaren; i also love this story! I think it might be better to split your chapters so that they're a little smaller, it's easier to scroll down while reading. I'll be eagerly *but not patiently* waiting for the next chapter!
~ElVeNdEsTINy

this is wonderful, i like the names
~ElVeNdEsTiNy

interesting beginning; i like how you wrote the dialogue between the characters
~ElVeNdEsTiNy

I finally got around to reading it!

Wow, I'm glad I did. Talk about tension building! And then you leave it as a cliff-hanger. I felt you had Legolas in complete character when talking about his father. I expect another update soon! ^-^

Wow, I just found your story today and I'm loving it. I really want to know why Legolas left home and what is going to happen when he returns. Hopefully, you will update sometime soon.

Great chapter, allthough it was a little bit long to read. But that's alright. It did not really bother me. Again, I love the conversation between the party members. They are really well worked characters and fun to read. Your descriptions of the situations and feelings are marvellous. Keep on going!! I am curious to find out what the fight with the Orcs will be like. How you will write it.

Interesting that Legolas chose to go on this journey without his father's guinine approval. I wonder if we will see some interaction between the king and his son.

Continue the good work!! I love this story!

Risque

PS: I don't know when I will update my stories due to a lot of schoolwork, but I'm in the middle of chapter 19 of The Young Dunadan.

ahhh!! you updated! oh joyous day!! ahhh this is so incredibly awesome! great job!

YAY! You finally updated!! I was so glad!! I was just like, 'hmm, I wonder if Starlight updated.' and I'm so glad I checked! I was so waiting for another chapter!! You're such a good writer! This was like the best chapter yet! You've really got a great taste in the way you write. You can just, I don't know, portray elves so well. You capture their very essence and it makes me just shiver because its perfectly written. Your descriptions, your archaic, fabulous!! Do keep it up! Can't wait till you update 'Lady of Leicaren'!!!!

T.H.

P.S. Thanx for all your reviews!! ;-)

Brilliant! Thanks for the chapter and glad you're back. ^_^ I really love your descriptions as well, and the Elvish language is just so cool... I've always wanted to know more about Sindarin so I'm sure you've done research on the net or elsewhere and it sure shows in your writing! So, please please please keep going, and continue the Lady of Leicaren too, because I love them both! ^_~

P.S: Thanks for reviewing! =]

Hey! I finally read it! Sorry I took so long >.

Dude, you are such an AWESOME writer!! Have no fear as to your writing capabilities, for they far surpass many who write on this site! The battle scenes were fabulous, the descriptions pristine, the characters interesting and true. This is so totally awesome!! I think another thing that I like about this story is that it is original and also the fact that you have seen to every single detail, leaving nothing out. Its preplanned perfectly and you know exactly what you are doing! Definetly keep up the FABULOUS work!!!

T.H.

P.S. Thanx for your reviews!! ;-)