Reno's last name is Sinclair. This has nothing to do with this story, but I read your bio and it said that you thought his name was Kiribani or something. I am 99.9999% sure it's Sinclair.

Woohoo! great start for a murloc story, can't wait to see the rest, Tyler's writing win :p

Sounds promising, can't wait to read the next chapter. They're really aren't enough murloc stories.