whow, that was so Spike! bloody good story.

Absolutely wonderful. P Great Spike p.o.v. on Buffy in character

I...I love. :D Lovelovelove. So much love. You portrayed his character so...E. I could hear his accent in my head.

x3 Lovely to read, wonderfully written. LOVE.

Poor Spike, mourned so much when his dear Buffy died. I love the last few lines, especially the paragraph that starts off 'I want to hate you. For dying, for living, for being a bloody hero, anything I can come up with.' So Spikelike.
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"Bloody lemmings, that's what they are..." - that's classic.

I think you may have gone slightly overboard with the swearing though. I know it was Spike, but still.

Nice perspective though.

Oh. My. God. This was brilliant. Perfect. You captured Spike and his pain and conveyed it to us brilliantly. Beautiful. Lovely. Perfect.

I luved this, you captured spike all angsty perfectly.

Haha! Loved it! It was Spike, right? In hell? Haha. Funny...

Awwww, Spike's POV... how sweet.

wow, i luv this! very moving, great angst. & i could like litterally hear spike talking. i think u captured his voice very well. really good as a POV. this gets a 9.5

btw, me & a friend r making a b/s sipper site, i think i might want this story 4 t/ archive. would u mind? please e-mail me about it

That was very very good. You used Spike slang very well, which is something most authors can't so. Very nice and angsty.

hey, awesome spike pov, it's a really good take, you've got a good grasp on what his thoughts are! keep up the good work!