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Reviews for: One Last Breath
Nissa too lazy to log in 3/16/02 . chapter 2
That story was boss! If the show had to end, I hope it'd end like that, but if it ended in this season I'd be thouroughly pissed off. Oh well...your story is great...and that pass thing wasn't THAT bad...for some reason it sounds like something Out-Of-It-Buffy would say. LoL. Keep up the writing.
L.E. Lamkin 3/15/02 . chapter 1
Umm...well, this was pretty good. Except the characters didn't seem to be that in-character. Buffy was mostly. She would probably want to give up at this point if Willow offed everyone. But...the whole thing about the free pass for vamps was kind of lame. I'm sorry, but it just was. From the beginning, the Buffyverse has shown us that a vampire without a soul, no matter how noble, is still a creature of evil, and a minion of hell. I mean, he doesn't have a soul. Yes, he's decided to fight for good, but I doubt he'd be able to go to "heaven" with Buffy just because of that. Anyway, for this story's purposes, it worked okay, but it was still kind of weak. And, even if Buffy did feel like giving up, in the end, she would not, I don't think. She has learned that she must continue on as the Slayer and do what she has to. Plus, she lost her desire to die. She wants to live now. Anyway, I don't mean to tear your story apart, it was pretty enjoyable. It would've been more interesting if you'd added a bit more meat to it, maybe, but I can tell that you were maybe trying to make this just kind of a short little glimpse at a possible future. I don't know where your spoilers came from, but I don't think Willow is going to kill *everyone*. All that I've heard is that she kills Warren, and that's it. So...either there's some new stuff going around that I haven't read yet, or you've got some false spoilers. Or, maybe this was just your speculation. I didn't really read your Author's Notes.

Okay, back on topic. This was a pretty good story, but not that strongly written. As stated before, the characters were a little off, but the idea was pretty good. I know this review is really long, but I just sometimes tend to ramble. My fingertips start a'flyin' and sometimes it's hard to get 'em to stop. :)
Yara 3/15/02 . chapter 1
Awww! I thought that was sooo sweet!..But one question, How is Buffy going to die? I mean Spike is going to be killed by the sun but what about Buffy?
bleach.and.ink 3/15/02 . chapter 1
tear that was really good, a great song fic! yes, a little depressing but that's how things go. wonderful ending, loved it!
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