Not a bad story at all.

It is interesting that this is the second story where you have switched Ranma and Akane's parents. You must like the idea of the Tendo girls being Genma's children.

Of your three "fantasy" stories, I like the overall feel of this one the best. The gritty and violent feel of this story captures the era much better than most. It reminds me of George R.R. Martin's "Song of Ice and Fire" series in the brutality of the age.

My only real complaint is that it was too short, and thus felt very rushed at the end.

That's Ranma for you, the mature and deep thinker.

Cologne for the win! That last line was awesome.

A nice story with a good concluding ending. still it would have been intresting to see some of the other charecters from ramna in there, like the golden couple or Gosunkugi but i can understand why you didn't want to make it too complicated.

Awesome story!! mushy ending, but ukyo kicked **!! loved it all.

4rom da blck chick$

Glad to see this fic ended, it's been so long I almost had forgotten the story. The romance at the end is a bit understaded, but waffy nonetheless. I'd rather have this that honey-dripping romance.

I know I have already reviewed this story (as Me), but after reading it again for the fourth time in half a year I think I should say it again: Well Done!! Great plotting, very well orchestraded, surprising ending! I am sure I will read it again, sometime. Thanks for sharing!

aw ;_; this is such a good piece fo writing!
Short, adventurous, romantic.. *sighs with happiness* I love RA stories like this! *faves*

(even though, between you and me, I skipped the lime parts, I don't like reading graphics :P)

Otherwise, PERFECT! I wish there were more of these in fanfiction...

this story is like, amazing X3 your writing style is very neat and organized; and i found no spelling errors (if you did have any, i skipped rite over them because i was too immersed in ur story to care.) and you have a lovely way of describing things; this story was an IMMENSE pleasure for me to read, and i thank you; i look forward to reading your other ranma stories and any of your future wroks!! ^^

hey! gr8 fic i really must say so. i really enjoyed reading it!

good good.. nods solemnly...
this fic is going just gr8 uptill now!!

hey!! this fic is really great so far! i really like the idea.. it's new and really well written . i wish i had your skills btw keep it up!

Bravo!Bravo! Best story ever! Thank you for this i appreciate it.

this is an overall review of the story so far. I love, love, love, love, love it to death. i have been reading it nonstop. I love how everything melds together. The action, romance, and sadness are so addicting. Please, please please finish the story. If you don't i truely will cry because this is one of the best things i have read in a long time. Honest!

OMG! I LOVED this story! It was wonderful! I really really liked all the descriptions, and the personalities you gave all the characters. I ESPECIALLY thought the relationship between Akane and Ranma was great!