chilling, but awesome. i like your molly. :)

Very interesting view of these two characters. I really like their interactions, and Molly's thought processes.

Great job. I really enjoyed it.

This was really interesting to read, you've got a really lovely descriptive style of writing and it makes it easy to follow the plot, which was very interesting too! :D

Oh. OH! Oh, I see! I LOVE MOLLY/MORIARTY SO GOSH DARN MUCH AND I WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER FOR WRITING SUCH A FANFUCKINGTASTIC STORY.

These just get even more amazing.

Morbid, self conscious and aptly beautiful...

I LOVE your writing style. This is very interesting - you have caused me to suspend disbelief and now my imagination is like putty in your hands. Write on! (ho ho)

Chilling :3

That was delightfully chilling. I love the pair as you portrayed them.

That was soo good! I love Molly, she needs more love, and I liked this because she wasn't portrayed as the weak, helpless morgue girl :3

I loved this ever so much. You made Molly a BAMF. And I love the intersections through the story. This is delightful! I love stories about Molly and Jim! I wish there were more!