|Reviews for 5:7 and 5:8 Uncertainty: Dempsey and Makepeace|
| xLaramiex 3/30/11 . chapter 19
Sweet. This has been a great story, thanks for sharing.
| xLaramiex 3/30/11 . chapter 18
I didn't realise gibbons were renowned for grinning :P
| xLaramiex 3/30/11 . chapter 17
Ooh, tense...reading on.
| xLaramiex 3/30/11 . chapter 16
It's true, he totally talks with his eyebrows.
| Duann 3/21/11 . chapter 19
I was really touched when Dempsey tried to convince them Harry deserved a promotion! he's an Ace! had fund reading the Post post script. some things will never change
| Blooky 3/21/11 . chapter 19
I hope this isn't your last story?
| Blooky 3/21/11 . chapter 18
For a moment there, I thought you would have gone with angst and therefore no baby. I guess their relationship will be out in the open soon;).
| Blooky 3/21/11 . chapter 16
Wow, I'm still amazed at your talent for suspense...it's almost impossible to take the time to review before reading the next chapter;).
| Blooky 3/21/11 . chapter 13
Very into character I think. Dempsey would be the one to be happy about the baby and Harry the one to get rid of it. But things can still change, because abortion is something you have to live with for the rest of your life.
| Blooky 3/21/11 . chapter 12
It's funny how Harry would think that her body would perform the illusion of being pregnant. Somebody's in denial;). It's interesting that she's actually pregnant during this case. You successfully kept me guessing whether she would or wouldn't be;).
| xWhiteKnightx 3/20/11 . chapter 19
Out in the open, the end of an era!
No more hiding in the bathroom of hotel rooms when they are caught on the hop!
| xLaramiex 3/20/11 . chapter 15
Such a tense chapter! Very well written m'dear :)
| Slyquinn 3/17/11 . chapter 19
Glad everyone is getting what they want. Well, as for Harry we'll have to wait to find out I guess.
Boy Dempsey really vouched for her.
Come on Makepeace you're pregnant, stay put.
The dynamic duo... lol
- Dempsey grinned "So this isn't work then?". ... I see where he's going...
- this new phenomenon of Dempsey and Makepeace; tell me about it :-(
Cuuuuuuuute, not so secretive anymore are we Harry!
Oh not Lacey, never liked him, who would? Hoping he won't ruin it for Harry!
Dempsey is the best street-smart character ever...
| Slyquinn 3/17/11 . chapter 18
- With his thumb James gently wiped each eye dry but that didn't help at all. You softy, I loved it though...
- "Hey we can still do lot's tryin'?". OMG lol
- "to find the lone ranger and bring him back to the ranch" Happy no one burst Dempsey's bubble...
- "She'll be like her mum and break all the moulds 'n still be the best Yankee catcher of the next century" True, he's boasting, nice.
Happy Dempsey had someone to celebrate with... Mac ;-)
I could so imagine Dempsey showing off the pics. Loved Harry talking to baby, revealing her "secret" love. Funny, sure she's mad in love but not showing...
Last line was a pisser, as always, Spikings on the T.
| Helenj 3/17/11 . chapter 19
I first read this yesterday and the image of Dempsey getting his gun out is still making me laugh out loud. Spikings obviously finds it hilarious too.
What a turn around for Dempsey too. He would have agreed with the idiots before he worked with Harry and there is no way he could have restrained himself in the pub.
I love the way the blokes just accepted them as a couple without too much fuss. None of them are really surprised.
I think I'm going to re-read all your stories until hopefully we get the wedding!