Hello Hikari Alta !

Can I translate your story ? I'll write that it's yours.

This story is so pleasant to read, and nicely explained, I like it !

You did a great job, I hope that you'll write again about Gothic Sports.

Sorry for the language, but I'm french ! I hope also that you will accept !

Good Bye Akunoko

i was really looking for something more dramiticly voilent as of this story i fely was more like a drab non emotional chapter i would love to see more of your stories if they are what i have in my intrests but other wise no no i did not like this story i simply stumbled upon it with out knowing exacly what it was there fore it was nothing like i presumed aand it was my least favorite.

This was so deep and meaningful! I don't mean to sound like a crybaby but this really should have been the real reason Anya hates Leon! Great story, even if it is a little sad