Good read but it has paralleled a lot with Merry's experience when she turned sixteen which made it kind of predictable. Are you inclined on continuing this? Because I'm curious of what she'd turn out if she ever makes it to being a full-fledged Fenestra and will Merry and Tens be searching for her too? I hope you do continue. See ya for now. Iron Raven out...

Good story. It just seems like a copy of the origiinal. Are you going to change some things? I just really want a sequel to the 1st book. Itd be good don't ya think?

I think you have done a very good job with the first two chapters, but it just seems very, very close to the original storyline of Meridean.

bravo, i loved it soz bout my meridian but im righting a real book of my own so i wont right to soon soz

This is sooooooooo cool way better then mine but I'm used to righting thriller books k :D