I like your versions of stories. I liked Batman's protectiveness of a friend even more.

Just re-reading some old favorites. I still love the way Lois interacts with 'Matches'. Wonderful story. Lois is right Clark is lucky with friends.

Really great. Better than the comic version for sure. Batman was more proactive (as he would be) and Superman did not compermise his morals (as he shouldn't). I love Lois/Batman interactions done this way. No one ever seems to think they can just have a relationship based on friendship. And it's so true how he puts others' safety over his own, even Superman's. I'm glad you didn't overlook this trait like so many others do. A sequal would not be amiss.

Your characterisation of Luthor and Batman is great. I loved the kids-table approach to the ring and how they squabble over it It's a welcome change from the tnese, full-of-hot air threats we've seen so far.
Congrats on a finely crafted story.

This was a damn good story. Well thought out and brilliantly written.
I loved it!

Bravo! Very nice. I love your take on Batman!

Wonderful. I've always liked stories with both Batman and Superman together. And you did a great job of showing a friendship that Batman doesn't want to admit to. :-)

Very interesting story. Love the way you handle the Lois/Bruce interactions.

This was great! I loved every single word. I can't wait to see what else you will do in the Bat-universe. (A not-so-subtle hint! )

Great story and I love the twist at the end. What would it take to get you to do more?

Wow. This really blew me away. Great storytelling, dialogue, and suspense. Simply great. Lois rules.

Of course, DC would never do anything like this. They'd have to give Batman a sense of humor.

really, really fantastic work. I'd be interested in seeing this become a series -- Batman, Superman vs. Luthor with supporting characters -- you do an excellent Lois.

Thanks for the read.

Good one. Real good. Bravo. More.

"one ring to rule them all, one ring to find them"...haha. just kidding. that was pretty damn cool.
- k :-)

Interesting work. Very well crafted.