Hey cool story man love it!

Unfortunately I HATE you! Why? Because I can never beat your times on X-box and it get's so annoying!

*Takes deep breaths* No don't worry about it, I'LL BEET YOU SOMETIME! MUWAHAHAHA. LOL

Ah, the first fic based off the new game. Very good.

Woah, I did'nt know there were Bugatti veyrons and Maclaren F1s in the game. Thats cool.

This also kinda seems like a preview of the game to people who dont have this game. Another good quality.

Do you have Xbox live, if so, wanna be friends? If you say yes, whats your gamertag?

I will rate this 10/10. I hope to see more.