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minnie.the.wombat 1/18/11 . chapter 1
AngelMouse!

This was an amazing cute little fic about John (he's one of my faves!). It portrays him just as I perceive him to be-thoughtful, not one to jump the gun, always contemplating. Good ol' John. And it was so cute at the end where John's sure Scott is his Christmas miracle!

Can't wait to read your next fanfic!

XO,Minnie
Loopstagirl 1/17/11 . chapter 1
Awww... that was really cute!
Tikatu 12/30/10 . chapter 1
Nice little story, though the dialog was a bit confusing at times. It took a bit for me to figure out who was talking to who (though the use of the word "sir" did help).

One technical bit that my teenaged biologist asked me about: why would John be spraying an anticoagulant (one word, or two hyphenated, btw) on a wound? An anticoagulant *stops* blood from clotting, not the other way around. It doesn't seem that John would want the victim to keep bleeding, ykwim?

Nice Christmas sentiment with a lesser-used brother. Thanks for sharing.
zeilfanaat 12/30/10 . chapter 1
Yay! You posted your Christmas story! :D

There's your Christmas miracle for you, sir.
Teobi 12/30/10 . chapter 1
A lovely, touching story, AngelMouse5. John taking care of the man's leg, calling him 'sir' (those Tracys were brought up right) and having a gentle discussion about faith. It all warmed my heart. We all question faith at Christmas. It's meant to be the season of goodwill to all men/women but we all know of people who are suffering and continue to suffer, whether with illness or just plain lack of whatever it is they need to keep going. Faith, in other words.

John is lucky in that he knows who he has faith in.

Thanks for a really warm story! xx
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