|Reviews for Aftermath Evil|
| Edhla 12/8/12 . chapter 1
My disclaimer here is that I'm not familiar with the work this is based on.
That said, this is really remarkable drabble, very poetic, and it's a shame that nobody has reviewed before me. You have some lovely images here, especially when you delve into the surrealistic.
Some do some across as a little indulgent- "opals can't shake..." for example- making some of it seem a little too clever by half. Reigned in slightly, and worked over so that every word is a winner and there's nothing wasted, I think this could be truly great. x