| Reviews for Finally Yours |
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NakedKing 2/5/11 . chapter 21Mooooore Mooooore! I neeed moooooooore! This was awesome... but you need to keep writing! |
The Little Lost Lamb 2/5/11 . chapter 21Nooo, don't end it here! Keep giving more Especially more battles where Puck takes down both the bullies It's highly amusing. Plus i do want to see the effect that the suspension and the fight had on the two bullies when it comes to Finn. So i'd just continue the fic a bit, to show the effects that their relationship has on their friends, school and other suchness. Don't do a '5 years later' thing cause that's just kind of cheap. Good job on the last chapter as well, i really enjoyed it. Hope to see some more! |
anythingglee 2/5/11 . chapter 21You so gotta continue this, its awesome and they're totally isn't enough of this pairing around :) |
Nick 2/4/11 . chapter 21 I just recently found this story. I gotta say, I love it! As for what you should do next, I do think you should continue it as a sequel. Maybe a chapter or two left here if you wanted, but for the most part, a sequel would probably be good. |
sociable-wallflower 2/4/11 . chapter 21Nice chapter! And I'm all for a sequel ; ) |
NakedKing 2/3/11 . chapter 20That chapter was awesome. You brought your A-game hun! Fantastic! |
The Little Lost Lamb 2/3/11 . chapter 19I've been meaning to review... and so i finally shall! I loved the lastest chapter, even my mum can tell you. I think i woke her up by screaming 'finally' at my laptop when Puck shouted at Rachel. Ahhh you gotta love Puck. I hope you're going to let him beat the hell out of Azimo (or whatever his name is). It's funny really, i don't even watch the show but i love this story/pairing! Anyway; so your chapters could be a little longer, and it might be good to review it more than twice before posting (as my english teacher loves to tell us). I'm not sure if you mentioned you had a beta, but even then, you should re-read your stuff aloud as he/she is done reviewing it. Otherwise i love the story and can't wait to see more. One thing i'm really impressed with is the speed that you get these chapters out; i love it. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
NakedKing 2/3/11 . chapter 19Awww that was... well it was. I think you resolve issues way to fast. This could have been like Rachel hitting on Finn all the time, and letting it build and stuff for a couple chapters. But Puck like... exploded in an almost unrealistic way when she just sat next to him making conversation. But it's cool. :P When you had Finn/Karofsky/Azimio at the top of the last chapter... I almost panicked.I was think oh god oh god that's gross. But it might still happen. Which would create delicious angst. |
sociable-wallflower 2/3/11 . chapter 19That. Was. Awesome. My mouth dropped open when Puck told the gleeks! Again, epic chapter! |
Caelice 2/3/11 . chapter 18I love where this story is going! In the beginning I sort of gave it a glance and kind of skimmed over it, but now I get so excited when you update! And I hope you update soon! Also, I believe Azimio's full name is Azimio Adams (yeah, his first name is Azimio, which is weird.). I got this from Glee Wiki, so I don't know how accurate it is, but it's the only place I know that actually gives a full name so...yeah. |
Dramon Roar 2/3/11 . chapter 18hey, this is a very good story, very intense. i love it! fyrewyre ps. i think a good name for azimo is eric. |
sociable-wallflower 2/2/11 . chapter 18Ooh! I hope there is some epic defending of Finn later! ;) I loved this Drama chapter! Sorry about your soda D': |
Pace1818 2/1/11 . chapter 17Poor Finn. I hope Puck defends his boy. |
crazylove4MCR 2/1/11 . chapter 17I love this so much! I read the summary and just knew I had to read this because it was going to be amazing. and it was! hope you'll update soon! |
sociable-wallflower 2/1/11 . chapter 17DUH DUH DUH! Finn getting bullied! :'( Finn and Puckcuteness! (I LOVE being random!) Anywho, nice chapter! : ) |