ooh, that last line totally sticks with me. :0

love love it! its written so good(:

wow, this is so great. and this is something I could actually see him doing

You should feel very hood about this chapter! I like the background info, it really helps give Dave the humanity we know has to be there somewhere. I think sometimes we forget that there might be very specific and serious reasons why a person is acting like a bully. In Dave's case there is SO MUCH beneath the surface, it is nice to get a sense of the process he went through to get where he is. Thanks for sharing, great job!

Wonderful story so far. Looking forward to what happens next.

Wow. Really well written- i'm loving this wave of "understanding karofsky stories", and you write really well...he really seems at peace. it looks like both dave and kurt have grown up. please please continue! will there be kurtofsky? i really like it and i love your chapter names!

-liza

I'm enjoying your story. You are a really good writer. Can't wait for more. :)

I'm liking the story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I am interested to see where this will go. Will Kurt be genuinely happy to see Dave or will there be lingering feelings of bitterness... I shall continue to read if you continue to write.

I like this. the tone, the pace, the style. Im curious to see where it goes

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i like that you're using titles from the Invictus CD. it makes this even more awesome. :D

I'm so happy with Kurt's response of a smile. Can't wait for what's next.

Short and beautiful...well done! :)

I really am intrigued with this story. You captured my attention from the very first word.

I can't wait to find out what happens when Dave & Kurt come face to face.

Write more soon please.

OMG I like this.

I like this a lot. I'm really intrigued as to what is gonna happen next.

And I loved your writing style. It's so easy to picture in my head.

I want to know what Dave has to say to Kurt...and Kurt's reaction.

DDF

XXX