Amazing chapter. I like seeing what Edward is thinking.

Princess you did a beautiful job on the writing of Max's and Edward's thoughts.

Sweetheart this is a Aw chapter.

oo update soon! great work so far!

Edward's thoughts on anything is fine by me! Me wanders what is held in store for Liz dear? LoL Love this chapter. The closeness with the pack and the Cullens is very endearing, and something that I have a feeling Liz will need for whatever is in store for her.

I love the chapter. Nice lookign into their heads for a while and seeing what they think. And it's funny how Max doesn't realize it, but Edward is reading his mind most of the time.

Awww... Look at Edward being all hott and protective... So sexy LOL! Loved it! Great job babe! Can't wait for more!

Absolutely hilarious! I literally laughed out loud! Love it.

Hey, Great chapter i was laughing so hard. oh will this be another liz and max story?

Awesome job cuz. I think I may have busted a rib laughing so hard.

You rocked this chapter hon. Love it.

Honey you did a terrific job.

Amazing job. This chapter had me picturing everything that they said.

Darlin you did a wonderful job on this chapter. It was entertaining to read.

My little love bunny you did a fantabulous job on this chapter. Leave it to Edward and everyone else to have some fun with the unsuspecting human well alien.