Please update

hahaha lol

you could add more to this i kinda like were this is going

Wow. This is really good! I love Eona and Kygo. Some of the word choice could be better but all around good job. I can't wait for the next chapter!

the story is really good i read the books a while ago but i still love them are you going to update the stories soon i can't waittt

I know this is a fanfiction, but I'm OCD so I feel the need to critique. Whether you read this critique or not is entirely up to you but I'd bet you could get a novel or two published if you get your mechanics down and your thoguhts together. :)

I definitely like your concept, but your grammar skills and punctuation could use some work. You're very repetative with your word usage, but it's okay because we all make this mistake more than once, whether we admit it or not. There are a few words that are used in the wrong space, like in your second chapter towards the beginning: "In fact I wanted to prolong our reunion as long as possible." Correctly, it should be: "In fact, I wanted to (post-pone, avoid) our reunion (for) as long as possible." Either of the words in the first set of parenthesis would work with the rest of the sentence. "For" is not actually necessary but I would debate that it would sound a little better included.

Once again, don't listen to me if you don't want to. :)

OMG! OMG! I LOVE IT!

i love it! write more please!

luved it

Please continue this story! I think it's really good... today's my bday... so... please?

Haha that's funny(: good one and update soon? (: I swear I'm falling in love with Kygo already((:

Update! I'm enjoying this so far... :D

update,update,update,update NOW!plzzzzzzzz:)

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I really liked it please update soon