This was awesome! Please say there's going to be another chapter? :D

Waaaahhhhhhh I adore this already So sad so suspenseful Please write more deary! Don't give up! Update soon!

Wow, harsh. And yet.. I WANT MORE!

Oh goodness, poor Ernst... Great job with the characterization. Also, your English is excellent. D

Just one English-related error that I saw: Ernst's eyes were just barely open "How long are you awake?"

It should be: "How long have you been awake?"

I hope you update soon, because I'm really curious as to what will happen next.

ah i cnt belive hanschen!

that so so so freaking mean

plz plzplz plz plz write more

hanschen has to have a heart in there somewhere lol

cnt wait to read more

update sooon plz _

-Jade