Truthfully, this isn't one of my favorites. I don't like the idea of violent sex being used to convince Abby that Connor loves her. He shouldn't have to become violent for Abby to respond. To me, Abby sounds to be deeply flawed and I'm not certain she deserves Connor. Your writing is beautiful and you aren't the only one who uses this type of scenario. I guess to me it sounds basically like "might makes right". I don't know, your other reviewers really seemed to like this, I like that Connor stood up for himself because I hate when he backs down, I just don't like the violence. **sigh** Don't get me wrong, I love your writing and will continue to read everything you write because you are truly talented. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Totally works for Abby being anti-marriage. Love how Connor manages to change her mind. ;)

I liked it! At first I was like, oh no, Abby with her issues...sigh...but is it so wrong that I like the way it concluded? ;)

Wow! Ok! That was real tense! I know I reviewed before on this but here it is again! Lol! Oh and the same stuff in my first review applies...you know good as usual and all that jazz! Haha!

Darn that Abby and her personal problems! How dare she ruin Connor's nice proposal? Although, that bit in the alley will certainly be memorable, if not something they can tell their kids. LOL!

Great job, as always!

HOT and when she said 'put that away' I lmao cause thats what you expect from her, (imo)

Yay! you posted it here too, I can add it to my favourites *g* Love it... poor Connor.

Well, I wouldn't say no if someone proposed to me like that...Hot!