I really liked this poem... sorry for the terrible review let me try again. Please continue writing because I think you really are talented.

I loved it. Haha. I hate Rinoa too, by the way ;)

I never adore or fancy Rinoa like many of them do. I really do wish Squall would choose Quistis over Rinoa.

That was breath-taking!
Wow.
You are so great at writing poems!
I LOOVE your fics!

woah man! That was excellent! How do you write such beautiful poetry?! im so jealous. lol! I love Seifer's thoughts here. very sharp and spitey! gotta love the spite. Puberty boy is in love! great line :)! lol. love this!

Kimmie

Hate Rinoa much?

yey! loved the fic, and i hate Rinoa too! i wished that squall would cut her head off since forever. P.S. i love Seifer.

Wow... Why I've never read this before, makes me feel dumbfounded. This was freaking fantastic, in the best way, of course. You are real poet, I'm astounded from your skills...

Reading your stories and also some of your poems, has made me feel intrigued about poems... I'm starting to fall in love with poetry! This has really made me think about trying to write a FF poem, but I highly doubt I'm any good at all...

I want to read more of your poems!

Kick ** cool! I think you got Seifer's feelings down very well in this piece. Very good.

Yup, Seifer's jealous. Interesting poem... I notice you like the Goo Goo Dolls too. John Rzeznik's a babe *drools*... I wrote a Selvine song fic using "Two Days in February" awhile ago. Maybe you'd be interested in reading it?

I really like Rinoa, but that was good! I think that Seifer really WOULD feel that way, almost exactly!! ^^ Good job,

~Quisty121

I like read poetries... They're really nice! How come you hate Rinoa? But am not saying that your poem sucks okay... Your poem's great! Very original too! Keep writing! =)

Very good interpretation of Seifer's feelings. Yes, I am in the minority who likes Rinoa *hides from tomatoes* but still I agree with your writing. Easily I believe that Seifer would feel that way, if nothing more than his pride. Which throughout the game was shown to be an important part of his persona. It's always interesting to see others viewpoints… I think you did a wonderful job on this piece. Terrific, poignant, and very in character.

I really like it! Very angsty, very good!

I still like Rinoa, though I can definitely see Seifer viewing her that way!

It sounds like Seifer. Really, you did a great job on this...it really captures his personality and I can picture him thinking everything. Cool!