Oh please - how can people say they can't understand who's speaking? Geez - all they have to do is READ the bloody thing...

I couldn't stand C-ko the first time i watched an episode of Project A-ko. The more I saw, the less I liked her. I'm sure there's some underlying reason why A-ko works so hard to keep C-ko by her side, but I'd do the same thing you had her do here.

Interesting concept! I'd like to see it fleshed out a bit more into a comedy fanfic.

Your writing style is very fast, as befits the characters and the series, but your use of brackets and dialogue makes the flow a little stilted. It's a bit hard to follow who's talking.

I'd recommend using this fic as a plan for a more substantial one, and use it to flesh out your story some more.

Good luck with your future writing!

A good idea, but come on!

A-ko you NEVER abandon C-ko so easily... and never at all for that matter. They'd been friends since kindergarden!

If you re-write this one, be sure to add at least some fighting, or at least the beggining of such, (like a mechanical arm lifting to smash A-ko, like the ant that C-ko watchs).

One more little note: Near the end it's not very obvious who's speaking, in a 3 person conversation, add the character that's speaking unless it's obvious in what their saying. I had to read it twice.

heh heh heh, i'm surprise'd a-ko hasn't done that already, just dump c-ko and go home! I love project a-ko, it's the first anime film I ever rented! Ahem anywayz great little fic there! heh gotta love that c-ko even though she is a whiny brat... bye!