I'll have you know that made my day

Awwwww that was adorable :D Awesome work.

That was simply delicious. A gorgeous missing scene.

Very nice. I was always sad that Mercedes Lackey never actually dared to write anything sexy for these two, but luckily we have awesome fanfiction like this to fill in the blanks, lol. Good job! :D

i love it and i always wanted to know what happened at that point

This brings back memories, I love this series and it was also the first male-x-male book I had ever read (my mother threw a fit, haha). You've done an excellent job of not only capturing the moment but also the characters themselves. You also managed to keep the same feel of the story so that if someone actually added this scene into the book it would fit with the flow of the story.