i like it,but if i had to pick rallen's stupidy from 1 to 10 it be a negative 1.

This is great can't wait for the next chapter.

your story is interesting oh and just to let you know rallen is the masked man but its not like krux becvoming mostly spectrobe dosent change him in my story rallen felt betrayed beacause the patrol tried to kill him and when they thought they succeded the spread lies about him so when he returns he dosent try to destroy planets only the NPP ,and his evil brother in my story (who pretends to be him while being a villan) 1 more thing the reason theres only 84 words in my chapter is because its an intro im still trying to fill the real first chapter with deatales its my first fanfic

can i be honest? i think this guy is an ass.