What a thrilling idea of looking into the future! I dont know why this is so pleasing!

My hitting the alert button was an accident. I am well aware thus was a one shot.

Very sweet. I absoloutly loved it!

Great story! Short and sweet! Your grammar was great, and the dialogue was perfect for the characters! Nice job! :)

love this, but it could have been longer :P really good though!

Short, sweet, and commendable. It's an impressive tale for one so small.