|Reviews for Breaking Patterns|
| J.J. McCampbell 7/16/12 . chapter 1
Style is reminiscent of Zelazny, perhaps due to the borrowing of certain scenes from the original books. Overall I liked the effort, but I was actually hoping for a longer piece. Writer shows promise, keep up the writing!
| Pyriel CZ 8/7/11 . chapter 1
Interesting. The end surprised me, but it is Fiona, right? So IC :-)