I know this work is from awhile ago.. but it's lovely to be able to know what's in Polly's head.

Nice use of second person, so readers are forced into her perspective. I think it would be well worth extending. This character was the one who disturbed me the most in the book, even more than the suicide.

Very good... I usually try to leave more detailed reviews, but honestly I don't know what else to say. Well done.

This was really good. could have been a bit lengthened, but still well written. I enjoyed it.

Decent. True to the book and the character. I'm not a fan of 2nd person perspective, but it works here. The writing style needs a little polish, but not too bad.