Awwe these are so sweet! Update, please!

Kat

Oh that's wonderful...I'm a sucker for babies!

other than the fact that you replaced chapter one this is comeing along very nicely. keep up this great work.

I wonder what Sarah would think of all this?

Way wicked! Keep writing! Maybe you can have a wedding and a break the husband's hand moment when she has a baby or something! :p lol! ta ta for now!

hey nice keep it going

Jareth really needs to work on his marrage propsels. not a bad story or start of story.