I enjoyed this so much! As much as I love Edmund and Fanny, Henry's demise always pains me deeply. Also, I've always liked petulant, second-fiddle Julia. :)

I liked this story very much. I always found Julia intriguing, because she catches on to Henry's game much sooner than her sister, and because she has the strength to make some better decisions, at least as far as Henry is concerned. You have fleshed out a flawed but promising Julia.

I like Yates as well, standing up to Mrs. Rushworth and showing his loyalty to Julia. Well done!

I never really liked Julia. She seemed to be Maria's shadow. But you wrote her in an almost sympathetic light. I like how she falls for Mr. Yates and how he defends her from Maria's mother-in-law.

I truly enjoyed reading this. I have much more sympathy for Miss Julia and Mr. Yates now. Thank you!