 Beck 8/13/11 . chapter 1 Nice plot! |
 phunky 7/18/11 . chapter 6Another amazing chapter. I hope things work out for Link and Zelda ) |
 phunky 7/17/11 . chapter 2)
I enjoy reading your fics. |
 Her.Vanilla.Majesty 4/4/11 . chapter 4I like Sue-Belle...I can tell she's going to be a VERY interesting character. Namali's cute in a 'oh-aren't-you-so-adorably-naive?' kind of way.:)
Link and Zelda sure have matured. Yep. Yes they did.
You have a great batch of characters. All with some kind of hidden turmoil and for Komali...standing behind the shadow of a Hero isn't easy.
:)
-HVM |
 Her.Vanilla.Majesty 4/3/11 . chapter 2I'm really quite dim when it comes to romance (surprise surprise ) so I can relate to Link's hilarious naïvety towards the impromptu wedding. :)
The cliffhanger took me a whole minute to figure out, but when I did I was like, "Ooohhh … NOW I get it!". :p
-HVM |
 Her.Vanilla.Majesty 3/7/11 . chapter 7 Can't log in, danggit!
But your story is AMAZING. Makar, my little sagely buddy is all grown up! And I'm in love with Shadow's wit and humor. It's smart AND loopy! Kind of reminds me of the Shadow Lord from your other equally awesome stories.
Ok I'll stop gushing now.
Update soon! :) |
 Allendra 3/4/11 . chapter 7Sorry it's taken me so long to review! Life's been busy.
But this was a great chapter! I really like the dynamic between Shadow and Cebus (I think I've said this before.) There are points where I quite like them, and others where I see them as the enemy. Definitely well-rounded characters! I have a feeling, however, that Shadow is a lot more complicated than he seems on the outside.
Update super-soon! |
 Beforethedawnbreaks 2/15/11 . chapter 7This story is very interesting. Please write more. |
 Bebz 2/7/11 . chapter 7 At last chapter 7! Worth waiting, very witty. Anticipating more fun, adventure and comedy in the next chapter. |
 Allendra 1/23/11 . chapter 6Eep! This chapter made me feel sick, in a manner of speaking. Ganon turning all the soldiers into stalfos . . . Komali being tempted to betray his friends . . . Aryll with Shadow . . . This is really good! Update soon! |
 Bebz 1/21/11 . chapter 6 Hehe hoohoo...it's funny...the king and his smelly sock!
Poor Ko, what's to become of him? And what's Shadow going to do with Aryll? Hmmm lots more to come and soon I hope. |
 Allendra 1/18/11 . chapter 5Uh-oh. Link's attempt didn't turn out too well. I like the way Namali talks. :) I can't wait to read more, this is very exciting!
P. S. Thanks very much! I'm praying everything works out! |
 catsrae 1/17/11 . chapter 5Interesting start to this story. I've enjoyed the first five chapters; they're as well-written as usual, and I can't wait to see where the plot is going. I kinda hope it doesn't turn out as dark as some of your other stories, though.
I love how you link your stories together, by the way. I especially enjoyed Shadow Lord Link appearing as regular Shadow Link; he was always my favorite of your characters. |
 shura pirate 1/17/11 . chapter 5 I love Shadow Link's It's great. Man oh man... |
 Allendra 1/16/11 . chapter 4The bit with Zelda and Link was really funny! I hope Komali doesn't turn on Link! This is very intriuging, what Ganondorf is doing. I feel slightly sorry for him, in terms of the racism he endured.
Sorry it took me so long. I was finished my novel and looking up some literary agents! |