These two are without a doubt the main reason I watch both versions of this movie time and again. I love this little snippet of what happened inside the arcade.

you should do a piece of what goes on at the concert.

LOVE. I love this couple and wish they had continued it throughout the series. The first one was the only good one...

There aren't many Amanda/Kelly oneshots out there, plus this was well written, so I enjoyed it very much :) I like how you showed that the two of them were intrigued by the other (you can just tell!) but on Kelly's side still stayed collected, smooth, and perfectly in character. The end line was absolutely the cherry on the sundae, too. I could completely picture Kelly saying it.

Anyway, all this to say, good job !

xox Sacha

Not bad. I like in-canon stories. I advise you to revise more; makes it easier on technical sticklers like myself. :p But I know how it is when you're in a hurry. Overall, nice job. Lets put the BNB on the map for cryin' out loud. xD