with koko!

This is so lovely. You managed to give me a hidden view on one of the less elaborated characters in Gakuen Alice, and you did a brilliant job. It makes me feel that this could have happened in a parallel universe someday, sometime, and I appreciate it.

I saw your profile information, and was sad that you were forever putting down your pen to write on fanfiction, but I understand that you have a need to build your own characters, plot and story. Good luck with that, but I certainly do hope that one day, you would come back, and add on to the Gakuen Alice fandom with more of these kind of stories which gives readers like us a peek into their daily lives.

ladykanamekuran x

Awwww, that was so incredibly sweet :)
I love your fanfics

This story was beautiful. I wasn't a hundred percent sure I'd like it at first, but then I read it. It blew me away how you captured the emotions in a new techneqiue, and I just have to say, well done! (I personally have no idea why I'm writing like this. I'm probably quite a few years younger then you. By, like, alot. (not that I'm saying your old, I'm just young.)) anyway, awesome story, and its a diffinate fave. :D

Emerald

I've always seen Sumire as a one dimensional character. Just another fan girl. Just the jealous one. But dang you developed her so well that I actually began to sympathize. Thank you for teaching me how to truly develop a character!

Hello, Anna-neechan. XD It’s been a long time since I’ve talked to you. I hope you’re doing well. :)

Anyway, this story was recommended to me I needed something to read. At first, I didn’t even know that it was about Sumire and Natsume. I’ve never really liked this pairing before and I never gave it a chance until now. Quite frankly, when I saw Sumire’s name, I had second thoughts about whether I should continue it. I’m glad I did. I love it. There was something about it that captured me; something about the flow of the words and the feelings it portrayed in the story that got me reading it until the end.

One word that can describe this is that one word which was mentioned many times: Beautiful. Simply beautiful. :)

Signed,

EzMouse

Such a beautiful story.

wow, that was really, really, really...wooooooow...your really good! I almost (almost, almost, almost!) felt like it was me, which is really cheesy, but...its really good, you know? and everyone was so, so in character...

Plus also I haaaad to smirk whenever Natsu-kun mentioned Mikan-chan...

has to be one of the best stories on fanfiction... now to check out some more of your wondrous works!

Natsume: you mean stalk her...

exactl- SHUT UP, IDIOT! *throws book at him*

Sweet. I loved the POV this was written in, and it's amazing how you potrayed their emotions so well. Just freaking brilliant.

I'm dying. It was just so good.

I couldn't help but agree; Sumire is a beautiful person. The way you portrayed her unrequited love -it was splendid. It was not one of those usual emotional hardcore styles; it was simply rational. She was sad, yes, but she's still on earth; she accepted her fate. Another thumbs up for my favorite author! :))

Oh dear. This made me tear up a bit.

A round of applause for such a realistic and charming story.

I couldn't help but feel the same as Sumire, because in this perspective her story was easy to relate to.

The perfect example of unrequited love that's easy to believe to be true.

Haha, keep up the good work!

Bolajv

it is really beautiful and breathtaking :D another job well done :)

Sweet. :) It may have changed people's view of Sumire's attitude. Natsume is the Man :D

I almost cried. Almost.

There's something beautiful about this kind of writing style. I especially love the way you capture Sumire's emotion.

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Thanks for another great story.