| Reviews for The Ponta, the Bear and the Strawberry Marshmallow |
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ILuvPurple16 1/2/11 . chapter 1Parent fight. lolz They totally mixed up a hug for a kiss. It would've been great with Ryoga in it too! Good job on this fic, -Purple_ |
Shunrei Ryuzaki 1/2/11 . chapter 1wow haha i really like this one. It's really entertaining. It's so hard to cease my laugh while im reading this. _witchangel |
dijanexryoma-kun 1/2/11 . chapter 1kawaii! i love it! please make a sequel about what would happen next..hehehe.. :) |
ToonyTwilight 1/2/11 . chapter 1So cute! Love it! |
TheRedSin 1/2/11 . chapter 1Kawaii! I loved how they were arguing about who will possess who.. Hahaha! SO nice and innocent! xD |
Someone with a Name 1/2/11 . chapter 1Love it. XD! This is so cute. Please make a sequel .. Like how Ryoma struggles on controlling his urge to taste Sakuno's strawberry marshmallow lips Then, he would have a rival for Sakuno's affection. Ryoma would be saying in his head that Sakuno was technically his so, no one should take pigtails away from him. And then, of course, being the normal Sakuno, she would be oblivious to it. Ryoma would be hurt though, because, Sakuno forgotten their kiss in their childhood years. Even the name "Karupin" that binds them together. Ryoma would be stubborn as well though, and only give subtle hints the kiss she forgotten, in which Sakuno would still not get, so, more frustrations for Ryoma as more rivals for her affection come. Lol, too much plot bunnies in my head. Anyways, I love the one-shot Although, I really do hope you could make a multi-chaptered sequel for this .! -Zuki |