good story...so far?

eh? Okay, it was cute and all, but nothing else happened.

wow how original! but my only point:

Especially when she called Lucy as her love rival, which is not true after all.

"I'm sorry Lucy-san" Silence filled the air but Lucy decided to break it.

"How about you Lucy? Have you ever been In love?"

right there, is it supposed to be how about you juvia? cause i think it would make more sense :P

hmm... I wonder what the incident was...

Great idea, but weird pairing. This is the crack pairing of all crack pairings.

Wonder what Gray would say...

EeLgIrL.