You need to fapping add another chapter or two I'm login this!

A bit sudden, but the simpleness was a really good contrast to the rest of the story. I really liked it!

I like this. Really original idea

I really liked this story. Blake was a complete creep though. I didn't expect him to do that. Well, I'm about o pass out so I'm gonna go now!

l love this Elsewhere was my favorite book!

Yes, I knew she'd be Zoey's daughter! Knew it... (Wow she makes a great mother, the passage at the beginning of the chapter was really sweet.)

Sean is Owen, I guessed right! XD It's an okay ending, I'm glad they found each other.

Good job! I like your idea and plot so far!

I don't think that you need to state every detail about her outfit or appearence, but I still think that its pretty good! Can't wait for the next chapter!

OMG! love it3'

love it3'