very cute but just one thing... vampires dont bite neck unless they want to kill his/her victim

Leave it to Haruhi to have a perverted dream about Kyon.

iz it just a one shot? i'd like it if u would continue? :D

wow are you going to continue it i liked it

WTF! it was a great story... are you goin' to continue it? it'd be great.

Congratulations is a great narrative. However, if you accept constructive review, in order to don't abuse of some words, you should use a little more of synonyms.

Keep on this, it really tunrs on.