Beautiful. Love it.

Simply amazing.

Aww...that was so sweet! I'm grinning like an idiot here!

You should continue with this! Like maybe more scenes from the movie or somethin cause this is ADORABLE! Haha, in a sad sorrt of way, you know.

Wow! And I mean WOW! You weren't afraid to put such passion and hurt into Gepetto's mind. I kind of wish it had been longer, like with more of the actual action and dialogue from the scenes you described, but I guess it did well the way it was. It was actually very beautiful on the last scene, because I can definitely imagine Gepetto reflecting about how hard he worked to create Pinocchio and then have it be for nothing. In other words, you did a wonderful job giving life to Gepetto's thoughts, and keep writing!

thanks for the reviews!:)

Aww, this is very nice! I always cried at that scene. Well done!

Great work. very cute.